Sunday, 14 October 2012

Well done Joe and Henry, you have worked hard to make improvements. Please read all my comments carefully and carry out instructions - they are mainly to do with the look of the blog and the multimedia criteria. You should also be using the comment facility on the blog, you could start by replying to some of my comments, ie informing me when you have made changes so I can go back and remark. There is high quality analysis from both of you which individually should ensure a level 4.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks Miss! I am now correcting mistakes, embedding links, and changing formatting issues so that you know when they are complete!